
Her vision is intense and defined.
Is that stone wall rising before her eyes
Really there or only in her mind?
I can feel the pressure in her breast as she sighs.
The tree behind her has lost its leaves.
Stark weathered branches reaching to the sky.
Is that a symbol for whom she grieves?
Does she even know or wonder why?
The pine brings life into her reach,
But she is looking away from the greenery.
What is above her that she doth seek?
What turns her away from the luscious scenery?
Is it real or is it merely how she feels?
Grief … the consummate, ultimate thief.
–Deborah A. Bowman
Lovely
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Thank you “Mom”. Mothers know the joy and pain of love.
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The joy and pain… and the exhaustion and the noise! 😎
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All of the above! Lol
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wow, sis. This is a fantastic poem and I love your watercolour. ❤
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I hadn’t realized until a friend, a fellow artist, mentioned it that I hadn’t painted anything in years! So I tried… The image came from a dream. Then I had to try and make sense of it. 🙏💙
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I love the wondering in this poem. Beautiful.
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Thank you, D. I am so honored you took the time to read it. It seems to have layers of meaning for me. I love your fantasy books!
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She reminds me of Jessica Lansbury. Beautiful poem! 🙂
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Interesting observation! Yes, she does. Maybe she is solving crimes and writing her thoughts in scripts. Thank you!
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That was my thought too. 🤗
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So beautifully well-worded Deb! An orchestra tin that appeals to every sensitive heart! What superb message! 🍂🌺🍂🍃🍃☕️☕️
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Just looked at your blog again! Very nice and up-to-date! Thank you for reading my poetry. Weekends are for ☕!
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Beautifully penned! Yes in sad times the joys of life becomes elusive. But balancing grief and happiness is what we need to learn.
Enjoyed my visit 😀
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Thank you so much! I’m off to check out your site!
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Thanks, Dilip. Such truth in your words.
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Very gracious of you to say so Deborah.
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Thanks Deborah God Bless and take care.
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